opusculasedfera: PK Subban in hockey gear (PK)
It turns out that the reason this fic does not work, despite my having written it twice, in both relevant POVs, is because the problem was not the POV, but that it needs to be maybe 10k of feelings and plot, instead of entirely porn. (The number is an extreme ballpark: I have, as yet, written none of the version that has an actual plot, and am choosing instead to whine to dw/lj about it.) There will probably be porn in it in addition to the feelings, but that isn't really a comfort at this point.

I'm really only still attached to it after all of this fuss because I think there needs to be more (any) PK/Stamkos in this fandom. This doesn't really make it easier to write, but at least I know now? So maybe, eventually, in a long damn time, this will be fic? *sigh*

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